chahtein badhti jaayengi,

socha na tha kabhi aashiki rang laayegi

par hawa yun chali jo kar gayi deewana

keh na paya kuch bhi parwana

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Celebrating Life said…
I read your shayaries and the poem on Rain. I know one secret about you now.....
Deep inside your bubbly nature you are a hardcore romantic person, isn't it. Often people miss understand this term; i know for sure you will understand what i mean when i call u a romantic.

Words and rhyming theme does not support your flair of writing much but thats not required always anyways.
Please keep writing. ALL THE BEST.

Love Asha
January 22, 2009 at 9:50 PM
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